Certainly different from anything I have read in a long while. Yet, the format works very well. It conveys the twisting, confusing maze of depression and a mix of so many other emotions. Quite a fray, ne?
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Very nice write. Just this last comment: the correct spellings are "vanishing" and "encompassing".
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P.S. Hah! Not the last comment. :P *winks and smiles* I include this for your enjoyment. I title it "Antietam Soldier".
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"The raven's feathers
Glisten in the falling rain
I wish I could fly"
I'd soar very high,
Higher and higher - no pain,
Only sweet, sweet bliss
Still, I lay bleeding
Life into the earth's maw and
Dream of Raven's flight"

Yay! This is a beautiful poem. You are amazing! I love your writing, and you should take my idea about sending your work off to heart! You'd be a hit, girl!
Kriss