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| Morncreek 2004-03-05 ch 1,  | abuseCertainly different from anything I have read in a long while. Yet, the format works very well. It conveys the twisting, confusing maze of depression and a mix of so many other emotions. Quite a fray, ne? | Very nice write. Just this last comment: the correct spellings are "vanishing" and "encompassing". | P.S. Hah! Not the last comment. :P *winks and smiles* I include this for your enjoyment. I title it "Antietam Soldier". | | "The raven's feathers Glisten in the falling rain I wish I could fly" I'd soar very high, Higher and higher - no pain, Only sweet, sweet bliss Still, I lay bleeding Life into the earth's maw and Dream of Raven's flight" |
| Kriss 2004-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay! This is a beautiful poem. You are amazing! I love your writing, and you should take my idea about sending your work off to heart! You'd be a hit, girl! Kriss |