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| lady-void 2004-03-27 ch 1, | abuseYour an amazing writing, your imagery is so vivid! These lines really are wow in imagery! 'As my pale hand writhes in the dirt''Red, red wine, Spilled upon the whitest of all silk, And a vile stain will appear' Go you. |
| Chibi Voldy 2004-03-15 ch 1, | abuseOMG!! That was great!! *not first reviewer* no... *cries* is this review to be worshipped?? Oh well... me like... |
| Tizzu 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThat's really, really good. I particularly like the stream-of-consciousness feel to it, and the line "Painting my walls orange, to stick out, so no one can guess I am my own prison." Keep it up... |