Heyaz! My eyes aren't cross at the moment hehe but I guess I have to be very very quiet *whispers* I'm suppose to be asleep, but you kno me (or do you??) I'm sucha nightowl. Hm... "letting go of our will to go on"? Thats something I can really ponder on at night. Sacrificing ourselves in order to survive... hm... brainfood... I'll have to store it up for later, my brain is out of order for the moment. Emotions run strong in the words... I hope you are happy and well right now tho O_o life is good. you're the one who decides whether it is good or not, so make it good! *sighs* if only my advice would work all the time. Don't you hate it when one little bad thing just ruins a whole good day and somehow you can't stop dwelling on that one lil bad thing? I hate it when I do that :P Oh! srry :P looks like i'm rambling about things that don't exactly relate to the poem... my mind tends to wander... I'm sure I was close on subject :/

Wow... I understand what you're saying in this poem. It's a great expression of feelings. Keep up the good work. However, you might want to watch the use of "its" and "it's" - "for it's anguish" means "for it is anguish" and it makes more sense "for its anguish"...
~Faerunner, aka The Walking Grammar Book XD