awesome. u never fail to impress. The comparison to the man in the moon was especially poignant.

O. Good one. SOrry kinda' in a hurry can't leave much of a review
Guy

wow...that was so incredibly amazing...i absolutely loved it!

wow, been there. you desribed it so perfectly. very powerful

this is really powerful. nice job

Hey Chloe,
"I hate the wounds that I inflict upon myself"
I know about this. Don't do this. It isn't good for you, or your self esteem.
Trust me.
Abbie

I like how you've written this it is very descriptive... Keep up the excellent writing! Loves

:'( but good

Wow ... great writing. I love your vivid, graphic imagery - it is very inventive as well. Plus I can relate to your topics. Your poem really speaks to the heart and touches the reader. If you want, do have a look at my new story "The Unicorn", it touches the topic of cutting as well, and I think you could really like it. I`d be grateful for an opinion. ~Eirien.

I can relate to this a little too well, for I have been through the same thing (my one poem, mulitation withdrawl). You can make it through this! It was a really good write. Most excellent.
-wings