When I finished that story, I just had to cry. So...beautiful...So very beautiful...

Ich möchte mich den 43 Vorrednern ansprechen. Die Geschichte ich sehr schön. Du solltest mehr davon schreiben.

It's beautiful. That's all I have to say =)

Moon's Poetess

this is really beautiful. I love the idea of a "love that would not flinch". A beautiful story that radiates strong compassion. I think everyone would like a love like that.

Hi, I was recommended to read some of your material by Stratiotes...

My favourite line in this piece is "...its silver horn no menace to her, but a silent pledge of protection, a deadly threat to her foes." It really portrayed a sense of the unicorn being loving and in that love also powerful, dangerous to those who would threaten the girl. It was especially poignant considering her obvious emotional pain.

A wonderful story, very profound... just wonderful, I think.

Beautiful. So beautiful. Sorry, it's all I can say.

this was very sweet! a very hopeful story, and so sad. im glad the unicorn comes to her in the end. and the dedication to your friend; so lovely.

(as for northern lights, dont take the title literally. ;) its whoever you want it to be.) - the Lady Elaine

This is beautiful. It has a beautiful message of redemption and I love how you conveyed the feelings of the masked but scarred girl. The old legend of the unicorn is such an intruiging one, but I;ve never seen a take like this on it before. It especially touches me because although I'm not much like the girl, I idenitied with her at the line, "No white Unicorn for her."

The only part I disliked in this story was the allusion to "the merciless accuracy of an X-ray"...it disturbed the poetic flow somewhat. However, it's lovely, lovely piece and going on my favorites right away.

I have had dreams like this. A unicorn, coming to me, after years of terrible, longing waiting, and telling me, once and for all, that I am pure, that the sins that took my innocence were not mine, and I was finally worthy of someone's love and devotion.

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very fanciful, whimsical, and inspirational. i know you have written this for your best friend, as you sincerely empathize with her. yet, i can't help but think that the flawless unicorn symbolize Jesus Christ. just my notion, but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!

Beautiful imagery, as expected. This whole story could be interpreted as a hopeful twist in many different situations, I'm sure. I assume you have seen the German (and English - co-production I think?) film The Last Unicorn (Das letzte Einhorn)? If not, you must watch it - it's still my very favourite film of all times and sounds as if it inspired part of this story. Good work!

heyy!u reviewd a poem of mine..confessions..thX! ur story'z rilli well written but i think i'm a bit confused but nonetheless i love ur descriptions..they're so..beautiful..

I love unicorns! You use such beautiful imagery and your descriptions seem to flow so easily. You really have talent. :) Keep writing!

Wow, I read this and I could'nt look away. The use of words is amazing, and the description is really deep. Its amazing - Congratulations !