hey. Good Haiku, it's really cute. The only thing w/ em is that in Japanese tradition they are about nature, but if you are just focusing on the 5-7-5 it's boss!

hm... your first attempt at haiku?
it's good... but there's just something about the last line that doesn't fit. otherwise it's nice.

It makes a person feel good inside. Good job.

Your good, but you missed a sylable in second line.

I really love the Haiku, but I think all the titles before it were a little unneccisary. The poem was great, my advice would be to just work out on the format a little.

~~Franken~~

Very sweet, especially the first line. Have more confidence then you'll be able to write better ^_^

Well, the most important thing about writing a haiku is trying to pull an emotion from the audience. You want them to feel something when they read your work. This is a good start, but I suggest using something you feel especially powerful about in order to set the mood. Keep up the good work!!