It's not one of my favourite of yours, but still has the strength of emotion behind it that isn't that much fun. Sad. Despondent.

Peace, hearts and cheers.

Jess

aw carrie! that's a sweet poem...but sad...dan..?

wow.. this really describes everything so well... i know how you feel.. this is very touching

hey i love it. its so kool.! you just reviewed my poem! thanks so much, i know now how to finish it so check up soon 2 see!

carrie :( another sad one, filled with such emotion. It's beautifully written and another superb peice of poetry.

damn, dont i know that feeling. i sympathize...

I feel the exact same way right now. Why is it that guys have the most tortuous ways of life. You think they like you and then they ask someone else out. Girls got it rough! ;)

hugs caz. the right guy will come round for you soon enough...and then you'll be quite glad that this guy here didn't get in ur way...*winks* HUGS!

wow carrie...this is...deep and frightening...and just...wow...you MUST learn to write happy things...or else i'll only read your stuff when i want/need to cry...

many people can relate to this..great poem it is very true and I can tell that you mean what u rite