oh wow that is really, really hot..make a second chapter and ill love you forever.

i must say, i'm rather dissapointed there wasn't a next

do you think this guy might have had 'raping' fantasies before or ... froggs is just so hot?

oohlogistics!and underwear and blindfolds!awhe's so sweet with the breathing and the caring!(i realize that you might have to reread this story later on if you're interested about what it was i was commenting on *nyah*)

*solemn voice* raping is not about sexuality but about domination

but he's all so hesitant and caring and all 'loverly' *gleeful*yago hates his rapist in real life?

ohthat's so cute!a robber shackling his victim and then making him all nude and allhmm ... robber wouldn't have been my first guessbut he's a guy ...*blink*france is an island?where are they?

after this would yago learn to kiss and be all trembly waiting for the day for his unknown attacker come back so he could explore his submissive issues?

oh *blink*virginitywowthis is all evil and crueland hotbut still evil and cruelpromises, promisesyet there was still no continuation *whimper*

*gasps*

That was hot. o.O

omfg that was hot
that was so hot
it was just... so hot
wonderful job
excellent
beautiful
hott
loved it
xoxo
meg

I liked it. You have to continue this. Thanks.

lol. interesting.

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THAT IS MEGA HOT
bad for yago
froggs (roflmao)
but, so cool
i'm so selfish
this is perfect
it's like jarnal
but better
yago's cool
you got a thing for the first time being rape, and you like to include male dominatrix's and virgins
ooh
is there a next?
please
pretty please, let there be a next
ah
i'm high right now
i'll probably start bothering you later again
UPDATE
(hope i'm the first reviewer)