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Clodhopper 2004-08-11 . chapter 1
very very interesting take. a blemish is not a blemish unless you think of it so - i like that idea. very beautiful
~Mack
mmoonsshiner 2004-06-20 . chapter 1
very nice, though i do sense a bit of...something in certain verses. but still its about time someone speaks up for us !

i love my stretch marks. im not fat or even large but my have these cool tiger scar lines on my shoulder that look like a giant car pounced on me and just dug in. four nice neat rows on each shoulder. ^_^ im getting them tatoo outlined.
~Nat
arbysauce93 2004-05-28 . chapter 1
Wow. you really make stretch marks sound so beautiful. I like the spider webs idea. great poem, and it's inspirational that you've accepted and embraced? yourself for what you are. Keep up the great work!
simpleplan13 2004-03-06 . chapter 1
wow.. ive never thought of it that way and its an awesome poem... its very thought provoking and the descriptions of the stretch marks are awesome too!
AntiPleasure 2004-03-04 . chapter 1
LOL! Comical, very comical. Strech marks are deperssing though =P can't stop laughing at the "LOOK AT ME! My stretch marks are so beautiful" LOL my goodness, does Heather have too much time on her hands? Or does her imagination run TOO wild? ;)
Jenna xx
YoungMommy 2004-03-04 . chapter 1
I love it! I'm full of stretch marks yet. Never thought of it that way!! Thank you for sharing!
poser 2004-03-04 . chapter 1
I just don't know what to do with this one, should I laugh? Cry? Vomit? I'll just go rest for a bit..
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