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| bfmusashi 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abusepowerful poem. i like your emphasis on the "safety net" and how you're trying to escape to where you know that you belong, not where other people think your belong or where they think you might go. i think a poem like this might be even stronger if you wrote it with a rhyme scheme, but its still good as it is. |
| Rieley Malleck 2004-03-05 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! It conveys your feelings well. Even if we didn't talk about it (:-p) I would understand where you're coming from. Keep it up! |