Whe! XD Love that R&B rhythm at "[i]touch[/i] my//hand//and.//it all stops." Hahaha! *not a fan of R&B lol*
You know my input on most of these poems, but I'm gonna review EVERY SINGLE ONE anyway! XD Bwahaha!
~ Kit ~

One heck of a poem you've got there. I love the emphasis on the italicized words. =] -beams-
Nice work!
-Cindy Moon *)

Its so good and it feels so close. Its really good writing

very memorable the way its written.Great job

I LOVE the way you write. It seems to me that every word means so much more when you write it. Every word is a memory for you, and your poems are just for you. It's beautiful, but lonely.
But to me, this one means the closeness of two people without having to speak a word.
You're definitely one of my favorites here.

What a different form of poetry. I thought that was a unique piece of writing. Keep up the great work.

Excuse the cliche, but "Ah, young love" I remember that, it does seem like they always know when to do something doesn't it? I miss that, looking at each other and knowing what they're thinking, spending forever and yet not enough time with each other... I hate memories, Je veux seulement oublier...

Gorgeous poem! The words that you use really bring it to life.