-A certain neko hybrid toddles along in, coughing and sniffling- Can't believe I forgot to read this yesterday. x.x
-Asimenios- I can, brainless.
-Kai-chan- Hey!
-Makrinos- What a wonderful way to treat your own mother. *snort*
-Asimenios- Shut up. -.-
-Makrinos simply snorts again, slipping into her usual silence-
-Kai-chan- Chapter came out nicely, I must say.
-Asimenios- According to her, your writing hasn't 'gone down the **' at all.
-Kai-chan- Nope! *sniffs*
-Asimenios- ...That's just lovely, mom. -.-
-Kai-chan- Shut up.
-Asimenios- I should throw you into bed and then bind you there, even if just for the sake of protecting those with weakness to-- *pauses with Kai-chan's hacking cough*
-Kai-chan- I won't give Iae-san my cold!
-Asimenios- ...
-Kai-chan- ...What?
-Asimenios, reaching to grab her by the scruff of the neck- Okay, you got your chance to comment on the new chapter, now it's time to head off before you contaminate the whole damned area.
-Kai-chan- But, but--! *dragged off*

-Kai-chan- Whoo! @_@; Finally finished it after the router dying on me several times... I, of course, read the update to your profile before diving into this chapter, and I take no offense. ^_^
-Cloud- ...She looked oddly pleased.
-Kai-chan- What? So I'm in somewhat of a dark mood this week.
-Cloud- Due to...?
-Kai-chan, flatly- I'm not answering that.
-Cloud- ...
-Kai-chan- I liked the quote for the chapter. *snerk* Reminded me of a picture I had drawn.
-Cloud- It had the same phrase as it's name.
-Kai-chan- I think he knows that already.
-Cloud- ...
-Kai-chan- Well, I enjoyed reading this chapter (love the bloody parts), and I'm looking forward to what the future chapters will hold. I better get my little arse moving to see about getting a few other things done. *turns, beginning to slowly toddle off* Ja'ne!
Daisuki
Kai-chan

Hrm... interesting rating change. *blinks* I'm sure later on it will become much more fitting than it is now, as so far, you'd be perfectly safe in the PG-13 rating. *shrug* Though if it's an issue of laziness, well... *snerk* I can sympathize. Thought I'd just randomly note that (I sadly have little to nothing to do after posting the very first chapter to my first intentionally humorous piece) and er... now I'm off to do chores... *folds her ears and grumbles, turning at the squawking of a certain parental unit*

-An oddly familiar little mass of dark colors, black, and silver darts out from a shaded hiding place, tripping over nothing and planting face first into the floor- Yeep! Owwie...
-A certain prince type fellow, glancing over a black clad shoulder to the young Notaru child- Hey kid, how many times have I told you to watch what your feet are doing?
-Kai-chan- Oh, shut up, Dai.
-Dainiae simply snorts, turning back to what he had been doing- Idiot...
-Kai-chan twitches, shooting a quick glare at the obvious impostor, and lifts herself somewhat, plunking back down on her rear and muttering- I swear, it's becoming a trend to call me an idiot when I fall into some sort of mishap...-Blinking, the abhominal child shakes her head, raising her voice- The familiarity in some of the things going on here seem to just get higher and higher, and, of course, as the story keeps going, it keeps getting better. *snerk* I noticed you used the same imagery towards the end of this chapter as you did in the middle of the seventh part of Hokuten. It certainly is an amusing phrase to apply.
-Dainiae glances back once more, scarlet traced emeralds flickering somewhat as he turns to reach down and grab her by the scruff of the neck- Hey, twerp. It's time to get going.
-Kai-chan, letting out a low mewl as she's dragged off- Mouu... it is?
-Dainiae- Yeah. Get on your feet, unless you want to have a hole worn into the back of your pants.
-Kai-chan blinks a couple times, considering this, and soon pulls herself onto her feet, trotting slowly along in tow of the much taller Ryuakurei- Nyou, ja'ne!
Kai-chan

This is really good. Only one recommendation. Split up paragraphs. I look forward to more.
Sivart
PS. Check out my work if you get a chance.

-Toddles in with a jangling bell, clad in a certain black 'N1NJ4' hoodie- Wow, interesting how quickly ideas for stories can change so much. *snerk* I tend to do that a good amount myself, though I've been trying very hard to refrain with my more recent stuff. This chapter came out great, I wish I didn't have to rush through and stop somewhere in the middle of my reading. (Yeah, this is my mom's comp again) Heh, I'm trying hard not to rush through this review, too, 'cause even if I don't get any reviews from readers, I can still give them with the same amount of randomness and craziness that is the Kai-chan.
-Yoko- It's amazing how often she admits to it... almost amusing in several respects.
-Kai-chan- *blinkuu* Nyou? Well, there is one person who currently rivals myself in craziness now.
-Yoko- Eh?
-Kai-chan- Ehheh, finished another chapter. Both the Sato-chan and myself have decided that at this point, a certain princely character has gone rather... -randomly waves a finger about her ear a few rotations- ...thoroughly insane, shall we say?
-Yoko blinks a couple times at the description- Er...
-Kai-chan- But enough of that subject and back to what I was originally here for. Like I said before, this was a great chapter. The vivid detail paints some very interesting pictures in a few places, and even the not so vivid. I can hardly wait to see what comes out in the following chapter.
-Yoko- ...You've been oddly civilized and... somewhat to the point today...
-Kai-chan- ... *shrug* I better get my ** off of here before it gets caught and then devoured by the connection eating demons that I decided my parents are... That would not bode well at all. -Turning, the abhominal little child starts toddling off in her attempt at stealth, which would work perfectly if she didn't always wear those bells that announce every move she makes- Ja'ne!
Kai-chan

-Kai-chan randomly snerks before turning to the review window- You have fun doing the random little author's note at the end, don't you?
-Cloud- Well, the normally unintelligent one always states just how much fun randomness is.
-Kai-chan- Cloud, shut up and let me review. -head scratch, turn- For some odd reason, those creatures of yours seem familiar in certain aspects, but I can't place it. I dunno, maybe it's just me.
-Cloud, randomly reading over a certain spot- *snort* Lancey-darlin... What an amusing pet name.
-Kai-chan- Nyeh? Yeah, it is. *snerk, abrupt flinch* Oh crap! I gotta get off mom's comp now! Ja! -With a turn and another flinch, the little feline/humanoid child sprints off, cursing in a hiss all the while-
Kai-chan

Hey this is pretty good so far. Will read the other chapter soon ^_^

-trots in on all fours, fully clad in blue- Whee! I've found this ADHD of mine to sometimes be very convenient. -randomly points at the images on her TV screen- I decided to check a few things on FP between 'visions' in Animatrix and look what I find, but a few updates here and there! ^_^ This is definitely coming out good and, like last time, my brain has nothing in terms of suggestions. -flinches with a backward glance, a pair of feline ears folding to her head- And now I must take of my leave...
Well, I'll definitely be back with the next update. Ja!
Kai-chan

Sweet mother of GOD! I screwed this one up bigtime! How was I to know my dot dot dot thingy didn't work! AARGGH!
Oh well. ^_^

-bats idly at her head a bit- Heheh... this took longer to read than I expected, though I suppose the interruptions from the Sato-chan PMing me didn't help much. Just like everything else of yours I've read, I like it. Annd... *snerk* I have no suggestions at the moment, interestingly enough.
Well, since my brain is oddly empty for the time, I'll take of my leave. Ja ne!
Kai-chan