I love the ending. "Let me go. Let me cry. I just want to die." That's a totally powerful, rock-solid ending. It about summerizes the rest of the poem preceeding it. good job.

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aw..that was real sad. But I did like the style. It was an original setup. Please keep writing..You have a lot of potential.

How many times I feel the same way. I'm sorry anyone else has to feel the same way, it sucks.