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| Amelia Carr 2004-12-22 ch 1,  | abuse-is scared and huddling on the floor- jk. very nice job; well written. |
| catseyeview 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abuseGood example of how hate is cursed. |
| Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2004-09-20 ch 1, | abuseHmm not bad. BUt OMG did you ex b-friend hurt you. I hope that was just part of the poem. |
| nick-wordsmith 2004-09-06 ch 1, | abuseVery emotional. One thing though, you don't (in my opinion) need the elipsises except on the last line. Good work! Stones decay, words last Nick |