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| Sarah-Angel87 2004-03-05 ch 1,  | abuseI dont think u've ruined anyhting, I really like this poem. its a topic I never would ahve thought about, and even if i did, I could never do such a good job expressing it as you. You have obvious talent. the flow of the poem, the rhyming...as well as the emotion in the words and between the lines, you did an overall great job. |
| insertterriblypoeticlineher... 2004-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThis one was wierd..almsot like it should be two different poems. You start off with the age old queston of, 'do i have a purpose, and will i make an impact?', but then you abruptly veer off to the boy, etc. if this were to be split up, they would be pretty good poems. other than that though, i see no other problems. |