Whoa, cool. It really can be dizzy. Remindes me of my poem about "Instant Insanity," when I wrote it I really thought I was going insane. But yeah, your stuff is awesome. Love readin' it, keep writing!

fast and spinny, like a bumblebee

very cool. it's kind of silly but a lot of fun to read. it's crazy just like you! lol

Oy, fun poem. Try reading it reall fast and not mess up (ARGH!)

But slow, I can't get it slow. I want to read it fast!

Oh! Its good by the way

wow..that was good...i dont have any fav. stories on my list...but this one will be the first! ~sporT (cyn...who else!)

this feels so frenetic and wonderful at the same time. the pace is dizzying but enjoyable all at the same time (lol hence, two). I love the wordplay it is fantastic.
mezzie

This poem is awesome, I love the originality of it. Great job!

lovely and exhilarating, like being dizzy and high but off of a combination of sugar, love, and lack of sleep rather than drugs. I make sense? eh, doesn't really matter for this poem, ha. We all need a healthy dose of insanity...you're right, it is pretty sweet. ^^
~lyv

w00t! that was pimpin'. ^ ^
I liked the fast pace of it. It's okay to read, but I tried reading it out loud and started getting it mixed up. ^__^
Tis lovely, m'dear!

Aw, this is awesome.
VERY unique, I love all.
-Carrie

the most unique way of writing a poem i have seen so far on fiction press.
i love it. dizzily sweet and beautiful at the same time! awesome... simply awesome. goin on my fav's

Sweet.

interesting... i like the a sea? see thing... i dont like hte "word" anywho tho, but i love the ending

not confusing
if u can think
good job

I like it. Very Unique...It is just like your name...a tango with words. Well done.