Yet again, a great work from you!

Ooh faeries me like! Gud use of structure it keeps the piece in a set pattern (I'm not saying this very well but u get the idea). Nice one. Go u :)

Love this. Great idea.

Another nice poem. I'm becoming a fan, I think. For what you write is both poetic and with ideas and stories. It much inspires me and create ideas for my own work to see how you write.