hey dragonsapphire. this is mistress ghost you know i love this story! you gotta' post more! and don't forget to EDIT OUT STORY! you slacker!! *hugs* ~Ghost

i haven't gotten to read the entire series so far, but when i do i'll review with constructive criticism on the last ch./
actually, i haven't read any of the series so far, but i just had to review because the central idea intrigues me seeing as how it sounds similar to the central ideas of some of my stories...and also by reviewing its ezier to add story to favstories list.
lol
keep writing update soon.

I completely agree with the review. This story is fantastic! I love it! Remember the key word: update soon -hehehe- And yes, a little more description of the twins will be so good.

this is a really good introduction. and, of course, slash is always a good thing! a little more physical description of katan and mio might be good though, because i can't really see them well in my mind's eye, or maybe that's just me. anyway, this is good, so please continue it.