aww thats so cute! great poem, i liked it very much- the rhyming was good and i loved the last stanza! awesome job!
Devin J. Pickrell 2004-03-05 . chapter 1
omg! I may only be 12, but i feel like alot of this all the time. Especially now that i really care for someone who barely notices me. Life isn't fair.
okay, wow, you're a really really talented writer, not just with this poem but with all of them...i'm putting you on my favorite author list because i think you're that good...keep it up.