Wow! What a surprise ending. Very well written. The suspense kept me interested to the end. Only one thing irked me, though. In the second part, twice you used "loose" instead of "lose". Unfortunately, this seems to plague at least 75% of the things I read. Other than that, great job!

Thank you for writing a quality horror story that is one hundred times better than the usual drivel. Besides your good writing skills, you've got a good, suspenseful plot. Good job setting up the back-story to the characters, now you've got me asking the questions: why did he kill her? what is the voice? and so on. Very, very well done. I'll be back to finish this later, and I hope you get more reviews.

Nice. Terrifying, sad, but nice, with the twist at the end.