oh...oh wow...I can't think of the words to describe it...its so pretty...*faints from hyperventilation*
L:BVR x

Beautiful. As always. You have the most gently heartbreaking writing style. I love it. Every stanza, every line, every device is p e r f e c t. Wow. Ok, shutting up, closing jaw.
~lyv

Amazing - there is such /feeling/ in this piece, and it flows wonderfully! I love it!
~ CoolBeans18s

Hye, good job, I don't know why, but I've always liked the phrase "domino effect"... Has a good flow to it, good job!