Wow. powerful, sad words. great job.

for lack of better words... wow! I loved the way you describe her pain!
keep writing!

definitly morbid and tragic. I like it!

Very good imagery. Thanks for the review.

This is really sad poem and the emotion comes across to the reader clearly. Imagery was lovely and the line that impacted me the most was "And then I hugged the grave,The representation of a body", as well as the last few lines. Well done!

ow, it's so sad. I really don't know what to say.
It's written briallntly.

is this true...? its so sad... *tear*
~YuRi
r/r mi stories too if you have time!