...Crimson peacock? *blink blink* Okay. *imagines Chibi with a peacock tail* AHAHAHA! And I like how it describes you. *looks up* OMG! A SPIRAL ESCALATOR! *dances around* THAT WOULD BE THE MOST AWESOME THING EVER! SPIRAL ESCALATOR! YAY YAY YAY YAY! SPIRAL SPIRAL! *tackles Chib* CAN YOU DO THAT? CAN YOU MAKE ESCALATORS SPIRAL-SHAPED?! OOH! I HAVE AN IDEA! WHAT ABOUT A SPIRAL ELEVATOR, ON THE OUTSIDE OF A BIG BUILDING, LIKE IN NEW YORK OR PARIS OR SOME PRETTY PLACE, WHERE IT'S GLASS AND IT SPIRALS AROUND THE BUILDING AND IT'S LIKE A RIDE! AT DISNEYLAND! AND A SIGHTSEEING THING?! HOW ABOUT THAT, CHIB?! HUH?! HUH?! I am so sugar-high. SPIRAL ESCALATOR!

MWEEDAH! *huggles the Oni plushie that she has somehow magically accquired* It's JUST LIKE Oni! Now I miss her even more... It's sad and happy all at the same time! *huggles you and Oni* I LOVE YOU, GUYS!

WHOOT! IT'S LIKE 4th - 7th GRADE ALL OVER AGAIN! AND THEN YOU GUYS! YATTA! The poor person. I hope that they get happier. ;_; WAAH! *glomps the person* Hey, whaddya know, he actually does have wings. *sweatdrop* Which I just crushed with my glomp...

MWEEDAH! GO DESTRUCTIVE FORCES! I like all the metaphors. Very accurate to what you're likening yourself to. *looks up at poem* Although I have to say, I have not had experience with you as the Armageddon. Yet. Yay.

Me:*hits wall with sledgehammer* ^_^ Hi! I'm Sam!You: 0.0Me: I come with my sledgehammer of Peace and Joy to destroy your house, kidnap you, and show you how wonderful life can be!You: 0.0 *loads flamethrower* DIDN'T YOU READ THE LAST LINE, BAKA?! NOT TODAY!

WOOHOO! ROX! I have heard this song a total of TWICE and I LOVE IT and that's my FAVORITE LINE and this is AWESOME withe FREAKY ANGEL and I think I'm having a stroke...

Mwee... y'know, if I were planning to commit suicide, this poem would probably stop me... no random comments for this, as I'm honoring its depth by giving a sane review...

I have a poem about my kitty too!(although this one is actually GOOD, whereas mine... heh.)It goes to the tune of the Love song, y'know, the one where it's like "L, is for the way you look at me..." La? No? Whatever. Here!"C, is for the way you claw my arm/A, for your aggression and your harm/T, for terrible and terrifying kitty/Cat, is what you are to me!" Da da da DA!*huggles Chibi's kitty" You sound adorable! Aside from the clawing and the chewing, you seem perfect! *huggle huggle* *drunken slur* KITTIES! ME WUV KITTIES!" (quoting a fanfic she read last week)

*WAHAHAHA! Ah, this explains why you were so enthusiastic at that corn maze for 'Faia's B-Day...*"Chibi,we've been here before."*"No we haven't."*"Yes! Note that the end of my flag drags on the ground! Note the drag line in the dirt!"*"...Hey, look, we go THIS way!"*Ah, yes... good times. I like the poem, it made me laugh at the end, for some reason. And I like this title. ^_^ Mwee. Prettyfulness.*Oh yes, and there are two things that I'd liek to say: (A) ...I didn't know that you liked Egypt too... *sweatdrop sweatdropsweatdrop*...So! How 'bout them ushabtis, eh? (B)I think yeh need to update yer bio, me matey. (o_0 Heh.)It says you're still 13! And also... I mean, not to be pushy, or... um, annoying... whiny... but... I'm not your friend?...*ANYWAY! I like all the poems, although I like this one best, and now I shall go read the rest and then go watch cartoons! MWEEDAH! CARTOONS!

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Very nice stuff here. By far better than any of my trash(poetry) sitting around my room. The emotion is very clear to me, you really care about what you write. A lot of people don't really seem to put their heart into it, at least the stuff I read from other High school and under poets.