Aw, so cute and sweet. ^^ Thor is just so naive and cute, while Syn's love for him makes him so sweet. I love the characters. I think you developed them well. Great job. Loves.

I heart you! Every single line of this story is beautifull. Every single line keeps the feeling going. I feel like I'm back in the ninteen hundreds when I read this! It's very gothic manga. Thor and Syn have PERFECT chemistry, and I love Thor's character so much! I can't believe this is your only first pov fic, you write like a pro. I think my fav character has to be the mother, though. She is dangerous and semi-crazy while remaining aristocratic beauty. Can't wait for more! pleasepleaseplease update! (also while I'm at it: please update Klutz I lurrve it! *sqel*) It really is a sign of what a wonderful writer you are that you can write something as funny and cute as Klutz and then completley switch over to darker themes like incest in this piece.

This story is so fabulous, it's beyond my capabilities to describe... It is so artfully written and shows the more tender, affectionate side of incest, not the "my husband molested my eight year old son" kind you always hear on the news... I love this, it's so well written. You've captured the essence of mutual incestual love perfectly... Wow, just wow.

I just wanted to say that your story is realy good! I love reading this, and I hope that will be more out soon! ^-^

-Bronte-

Your an excellent writer. Tis an excellent story so far, don't stop now.Pwease update soon!

I like it, it's really sweet, and I admire you trying to write in first person, you did well. Although I like Klutz better ^__^

loved it! hope you update sooner rather then later!

will you please finish this as well?

interesting. hope you write more soon!

This is a beautiful story that is extremely well written. I encourage you to add more.

this story is beautiful, so...so passionate but also so calm. maybe the music im listening to right now but the combination left me very emotional. youre an amazing author being able to capture a soul in such a beautiful authentic way. all i can say is that allmost all the storys here are better than storys that where actualy published and yours are definatly on that list of storys streight on the top.
-naomi shemer

There isn't anyway to describe this at all. It's too good. Totally fabulously done. Fantastical! :)

Wow . . . I can't wait until that 'mother' gets what she knows must be coming.

So sweet!

I would say something like Wow or excellent, but I don't think there are any words to convey this story. Not one emotion I could put it into. I can see your eyes in it. So intense and filled with a passion for writing. I can see the grace that you put into this, the subtle innocence in it all. There are no words.