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i like how the last line is a questions... its a very nice poem

It's either the butterfly's resurrection that's beautiful or your ability to describe the world through a butter fly's sight that is! Really nicely done on that part! When do we all get to be butterflies?!?

Sorry. I don't think I CAN review this.

Another great poem. Really good use of your metaphores and imagery.

Hey it's me, kitkat. Thanks for your earlier review, now it's my turn. I really like this poem. It creates a lot of really beautiful images in my mind. Sometimes when we're upset, that inspires us to write great things like this. Believe me, I know.
~Katie

hi i love this poem!

...not my favorite from you. not too bad, but definitely not my favorite.
~Tigress Moon