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| deletedfpaccount 2004-04-15 ch 1,   | first off, i must commend you on a very clever username! this poem reminds me strongly of one of my favorite works of my own, though we address the same subject from different perspectives. your imagery is quite well-crafted, and this produces a strong narrator, whose eagerness to kill contrasts with the general human tendency to preserve life, and therefore with the inital feelings of most readers upon reading this. well done; i like it very much! |
| LaTierraSutil 2004-03-10 ch 1, | wow. i am amazed. this is deep. i have a soft spot for dark poetry, and this poem is awesome. keep up the good work. |