 deletedfpaccount 2004-04-15 . chapter 1first off, i must commend you on a very clever username! this poem reminds me strongly of one of my favorite works of my own, though we address the same subject from different perspectives. your imagery is quite well-crafted, and this produces a strong narrator, whose eagerness to kill contrasts with the general human tendency to preserve life, and therefore with the inital feelings of most readers upon reading this. well done; i like it very much! |