whoa... I like how you said "messing with Death toying with him"like Death is a person.. pretty cool.From what I understand you like to make songs and stuff.. I hope you make it!!good luck

I like the wrecklessness of it... Almost foolish, but there's something that everybody admires... I like the "never blink, never bleed, never die" .. I think "never think" could be added, Lol. It's kinda different that the "devil" is dead, but of course it's only a daredevil, but it sounds interesting. Okay well nice job!

Nice. Thats all I can say. Nice nice nice!

Great idea, could use a bit of touching up though. Maybe turn it into one of your awesome songs?

wow... cool!

Man, this is amazing! How can you write so deep? Hehe I'm jealous! Awsome work (as always!)
~*K@$ey*~
PS- Thanks for reviewing my stuff. I really appreciate it! I'll review more of your stuff when I have some more time, I promise. Lol, you've been reading all my old pieces, haven't you? Hehe I hate my old work =P But I'm so happy you like it and took the time to read it. Thanks SO much! =D

Good job, keep writing!

I like the devil part, nice way of giving an image...As always, I love it!hehe..;-)

this is good. i really likie it! Thanks for the review.
~Tiff~

This is powerful, it's really good! I like it better than the movie :)