Oh...likey...XD "TAKE MY BREATH AWAY, [INSERT THE BOY'S NAME]!" hahahahah! *points and laughs, then stops to glomp her b/c she wouldn't be THAT mean...XD*
~ Kit ~
Haha, love your work! And you! XD

I love this piece...esp. your last line.

You're a really good writer you know that? The poem is portrayed nicely. Not much use of words but that's what makes it unique in each stanza. Very original. Keep up your amazing work.
Jenna xx

I like it. It vaguely speaks to my heart. Very vivid... its charming.
Tokiko

Loverly! Invokes much emotion!
-Cindy Moon *)

The descriptions are absolutly wonderful...no, not wonderful...divine...vivid. I love it! The way you describe the voice and laughter and accent...I felt like I could hear and feel them. Bravo!