Woohoo! It's been a very long time since I've had a chance to be online long enough to read stories! Erika seems to be Miss Popular *wink wink*. Anyway, good chapter. It seems like you just kinda cut it off, though. But hey, it makes me wanna hurry onto chapter 16, and that's the point, right? Anyway, onto 16!

Hm...missing documents...And the homicide/accident is directly linked? This story just keeps getting better and better! _

NO! You can't leave it off there, you just can't! Well, yes you can, but...well...-_-; Good, short chapter, takes Erica and Zach's relationship further. Though why she would wanna be with a guy who beat her up is beyond me...And what open message on the pocket PC? I'm confused (which happens easily). Continue continue continue! *hops about*

WHAT? Ohmygod! Felix is her dad? _ Does FELIX know? *suggestive glance* Anyway, I think that Zach/Commander is an interesting character, and I can't wait to read more as your story just gets more and more complicated/interesting. _ Oh, and Eric is interesting too. He's a complete mystery to me. _ So, since I can't wait...I shall move on to the next chapter! (I just love having that handy next button! WOO!) *zooms off*

Teehee! Great ending to the chapter. I still don't quite get the Commander. Is he a shape-shifter? Why the hell did he beat the shit outta Erica? Oh well, I'm sure you'll explain it all in due time! _

author's note: i have only one thing to say, keep reading and questions will be answered (sometime).

wait. who's dad is felix?

Hey! OMG, Commander beating the shit outta Erica? NO! And the whole scene with Felix was sweet, but I think he wants something, you know? Anyway, this was a good chapter, and I'm definitely looking forward to more! Ah, and on a side note, it would be a good idea to accept anonymous reviews-you get more that way! _

What? The commander has more than one form? EEK! I'm getting so enthralled, I just can't wait to see what happens next! This story is the ultimate, ever. Do you mind if I recommend it on my profile? Cause I won't if you don't want me to, but damn, is this story worth it. _ Keep up the excellent work!

Haha! I like the 'really tall dude' line! And Felix's character is totally great. This story just keeps getting cooler and cooler, I can't wait for more. _

Author's note: in this chapter, i make a reference to an "Avarice Document". This is from a previous story, "The Avarice Document". If you have some questions as to what it is, i suggest you read the story.

OOh! It's getting so exciting! I like your humor. It doesn't detract from the story at all (now, with me, humor is the story...but we won't get into that). I did notice a typo that confused me a bit. Near the end, it says "I looked up at me, puzzled." I'm assuming that Erica is looking at the Commander, right? Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for more! *bounces around excitedly*

Haha! I liked the whole "it reeked of design and security flaws." That one got me laughing! The way you describe everything is just perfect for someone with an overactive imagination like myself, because you describe enough to give me something to go on, and then allow me to go with it on my own. That really helps me get into the story! I'll definitely be looking forward to the new chapter, since there are so many questions I want answered! _

Oh my, how did they get the stranger into custody? He strikes me as pretty powerful, so he must've let them, right? Ah, I dunno. Your story has me thinking! Yay! Most of the time, when I read a story, I can tell exactly what's gonna happen next and blah blah blah, but not this one. That's awesome! _ And also, your writing style is very laconic (as is your main character!). I love that type of writing. Most English teachers will tell you that it's a bad thing, but I don't think so. I think it can really add to the tone of the story, you know? Set the mood. Anyway, I wanna read the next chapter, so until then! _

Hey! Good chapter! I liked the "dressed in head to toe leather" line. That was really great the way you worded that. Not many people can make unique wording work like you can! Well, moving on to the next chapter now! _