yah! i know this feeling VERY well. oh, and since i am reading ur poems down the list it cracked me up... "remember" and then "forget"

Aww, this is sad. Good though. I like the repetition. I'm not totally sure what it's about, but that's just my slowness, not any mistakes on your part. I'll just have to go reread it..um..5 or 6 more times...OK, only one crticism: I don't think Goodness (as in, for Goodness sake) should be capitalized. It makes it stick out. Oh, yeah, and it's funny that you have Forget and Remember next to each other. Was that on purpose?
If you're not tired of hearing from me (actually, you have no choice! muaha) I'll answer your questions/comments. Thank you for complimenting my taste, but actually, ancamna is the one who picks my stories for me. I do intend to read Anne McCaffery sometime...soon... Which Diane Duane book have you read? Was it the Young Wizard series? Because that's what I've read. How come you can;t find it? It should be in the library. If not, then, nyahh to your library for bad book selection. (no offense to it though, hehe... ^_^) OK, I'll stop now. bye

I love the way that you end th e poem with such finality.