E! Very nice rhythm, lass! ^__~ I like! So good. Mayhap for lit mag... *ponders*
The rhythm is what really makes it, e'en tho the diction is good. Wise choice of formating!
Good job, lass :-P

Wow! That was so amazing!Even though I've never had that sort of relationship, I still know what you mean!

very nice, love the rythem.

Wow, this is great! It really captures that 'aha!' feeling when you finally remember something. This is how I get with dreams; I'll be trying to rememer a dream, and then as soon as I stop thinking about it, it all comes back. Good job!
Thank you for your reviews! I didn't get an alert for them, I don't know why. Uh-oh, I'm getting nervous now. . .I'm afraid I'm going to start getting piles and piles of review alerts again. Aack! O.O
Oh no, you lost your disk? That's so horrible. I hope you find it real soon. Also, sorry you're sick! Feel better soon! And good luck with your classes. And you have plenty of excuses not to be reviewing or updating, so don't feel bad at all. Just get better and pass all your tests, and then you can devote all your energy to fictionpress. Good plan? Good. And. . .and. . .yeah. I'm out of stuff to say.
Oh, right-I'm on your bio page! Yay, I feel special! Heh. . .I haven't even reviewed that much of your stuff. . .*guilt* >_< Oh well. . .I think I'm finally done now. Feel better! ^_^

I have the worst memory ever! So.. I can relate to the feeling. I love the whole "step step step, click click click" It gives the poem that extra something.