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| atadobsessive5345 2005-12-23 ch 1,  | abuseCool. Having a friendship with the wind, that is. It was fun to read, nifty, snazzy, you know, all those fun words I enjoy using to describe things. Meh, my energy high from earlier is disappearing, so my words are much more forced. Ah well, I still enjoy reading. It was well done. I think it deserves more reviews, but then I think most of what you write does. Not in that whole 'you're my bestest best friend and I'm going lie and defend you and all that jazz'. Sorry, maybe that's just me. the people I know are really bizarre when it comes to how the things they do. ^_^;; Well, good job nonetheless. |
| Crash 2004-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat...is so freakin cool...Whoa...o.O I really like that. Oh, by the way, eighth or ninth paragraph up from the bottom, you put 'new' instead of 'knew'. Figured you'd wanna know. |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-03-08 ch 1, | abuseHello Chaos- Nicely done with the first person style. I liked it very much, and it was well written too. Whispers In Silence |
| baditterbunnyqueen 2004-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThe first paragraph is absolutely beautiful. The piece was good. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. |