Ahh beautiful poem yourself...and thanks about mine. The whole poem was written after my g/f had left on the bus. nothing was forced as I was simply writing down what was written already in my mind. I simply adore your poem and I shall fix the mistakes in mine! Thanks for pointing them out and helping me fix them... shall look forward to your wisdom.. if you come across any of my other poems...(Has a lot.. just need to put them up!!) e-mail me if you get the chance you sound really cool.. mercyonterra@yahoo.com I would like to talk poetry with you!! I'm gonna go read the others you have... see ya!

Whoa, awsome poem ( The title is what caught me:)I love the way you describe the vampire's desire and how you you different name for blood..."...wine of your life" So cool!