Downy dreams you evoke well. m

First of all, I liked the title. It was a nice, creative way to open it all up.

All the words gave the idea of soft, hushed movements in the very early morning. It was wonderfully peaceful, and made me smile.

I love how you ended it: "My lips sing silence." A beautiful, delicate, slightly contradictory phrase. Perfect.

This piece describes so much, and creates so much imagery, and still it can't be converted into words to give a proper review. Great work.

I like.

Wonder ful haiku! :) A like that with the Naiads!

Softly beautiful. I love this image/feeling muchly.

Beautiful wording. I especially like the last line.
PS: I read your review of Seeker of the Way. and I say capture the castle too...It was hilarious. Good movie choice.

I was caught up in the poem when I read the first line. Beautifully written tanka.

*Seeing Starz*

In response to Fifteen Candles: Think abstract plot. If you don't get it, IM me and I'll explain. I don't expect everyone to understand, you know.

Lyrical, delicious. This poem isn't deep at all, just gently hedonistic and pleasant. I like it.

*sneaks into back corner of LYV's profile* heh, i'm back. *frantically dodges tomatoes* sorry! whoa dang, you posted this like a million years ago. *sigh* sometimes, i marvel at my own ignorance and stupidity. *double sigh* well, anyway, it's a fantastic poem. it has this definite yet gentle substance to it like if you could create clear mist, this is what it would feel like, mmhm, yep. the final couplet was especially magical, i absolutely loved the "naiads laugh in echoes" line simply beautiful. :) there's almost something kinda holy about it, actually . . . definitely a great piece. awesome work chica! :D

A ... double haiku, if I can call it so, about sound. It's like you go camping, but after two days sharing obligated intimacy with your pals you escape briefly one night with you camera, and you watch a part of the sunset all alone, not even hmming a song, on the lake and with the great trees surrounding you, until it's become too dark and you can't take your photograh...

beautiful, very much lost in a moment and full of imagery for a short poem, love it, very quiet, awesome job

This was so beautiful! It shows such a lovely, wonderous image... I'm speachless!
CoolBeans18s

oh, very beautiful. I like the image it conjures.