|Reviews for A Mortal's Fate|
| veralidaine sarrasri 3/9/04 . chapter 1
that was great! can't wait till next chapter
| AngelOfMusic387 3/9/04 . chapter 1
Poor Damien. Why does he have to be sacrificed? Is it because he is "evil"? Update quickly, because I want to know more! As always, I'll be happy to beta this story if you want me to. :)
| Peg Pannery 3/8/04 . chapter 1
I think your giving too much away, leaving little left to develop. Also, try not to make your boys sound like girls!