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My life is over
Papillon Sierra
2004-03-13 . chapter 1
wow... that's exactly how i felt when my past boyfriends dumped me... very good poem... and i'm sorry she dumped you :(
deadxfish
2004-03-10 . chapter 1
this was so beautifully written even though the subject is so sad. i think that you put the feelings that you're having in such a perfect combination of words. you really have a gift and this poem shows it alot.
eighteen hundred
2004-03-08 . chapter 1
Aw... really sad... the reference to underwear sort of ruins the effect though...
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