Reviews for Falling Apart - FictionPress.com

Alex 2005-08-08 ch 1, anon.	abuse"I've sold myself short more then once,When truly once was enough." wow. i can't even describe the wow. its a different kind of wow. but a wow regardless :)
Aftyn 2005-01-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseI know this probablly has nothing to do with the poem at all, but it reminds me of my grandmother. She has alziheimers...however uspell it, and it just kind of makes me think about that. It brought a tear to my eye, not going to lie.
me 2004-05-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseur so good
Fiamma Blu 2004-03-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. Great work! I can relate this to a guy I like in my own life. I love stuff I can relate to! Keep it up! ~Alyssa~
Kurisuteru-chan 2004-03-14 ch 1,	abusehm...I like it! The ending left a good taste in my mouth. ^_^ There are some parts I'd do differently, but over all you write in a style alot like mine. Keep on writing, I'd like to see some more of your work.
alyssa 2004-03-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseyour poem is way better than mine. u should put up some of your other ones that u won`t read to me. talk to you soon.