Interesting, but with a unfinished feeling.

aw (:
Usually I would say: continue, but erm, this seems like a good ending. Cliffhangers are always good things to leave a one-shot at, because people review about that too.

That was so sad... And very beautiful. I loved it.

Kathryn's my name! How exciting. :D This was really well done. (But maybe I just loved it because I so rarely see my name actually spelt like that unless I'm writing it.)

r u making more than one chapter? cuz its really good! i can't wait to read more!

Brandon seems like a great guy (apart from the eavesdropping thing)... this story is really good... are you going to continue it?

Oh, it's so bittersweet. I dont really like Kathryn though.. she doesnt seem good enough for Brandon. He's so frikin sweet! Omg, I knew a man likethat.. :whistful sigh: Well, i hope it gets happier soon! Cant wait for an update on this, and For the sake of. UPDATE soon!
~Fallen FAntasist

I don't usually read modern day stories, but when I saw that Knightengale had written this one... well, I decided to give it a shot.
I'm glad I did. This is just as good as your Regencies are. You understand human emotion so well that I forget half the time that your bio says you're still in high school. You write like you have at least ten years more world experience than that.
Anyway, I don't know if you plan to do more with this story or not. It works fine as a one-shot, but I could see where you could go on with it too.
Sorry about the writer's block. It happens to everyone - and somehow strikes worse while writing sequels. (At least that was my experience with it.) I'm glad to hear you're not giving up on "Propriety," though. You've got a good thing going there.
Anyway, this review feels like it's growing as long as the story was, so I will just end it by saying, once again, good job.

This makes me feel awful... I've been in a situation slightly like that, only I was the initiator of the breakup... It was terrible... I'm still not better from it. You should continue this, and maybe resolve it, too... please?
It might help me a bit... please?

brilliant first chapter.