Not bad! I'm bad at poetry too, but I managed to pull off two. I liked this Angie :) Nice job.

*hands Angie a muffin* I like. You're not bad at poetry! Good descriptive language, and a nice idea. Keep it up!
Aornis ;0)

with a little work, you can be a good writer. trust me, my first poems were so horrible that they would burst into flames if they saw the light of day. this is an ok poem but with a little work, you'll be a great writer.