"Drowned and suffered/ Bombarded by tears/ Gasping for air/ It was a casualty of war" was my favourite stanza. This is beautiful in it's sorrow filled style and I love it.

I really like this poem. It was sad to me however... the fact that life isn't always peaches and lollipops.. ya know? That even though someone might be smiling on the outside, that they might have something else going on inside. I understand where you are coming from with it, though. The whole facade thing. Keep writing, Ash!!