Once again, a well produced chapter. I love the narration in this, given it's remotely real. I was taken aback at first by reading "Chili-lime is not a real flavor!" -grin- You used my quote, and it's half dedicated to me. -beams- ^^ Thank you for the fresh outlook on highschool life, told of course through the eyes of quite an intellectial fellow ^_~. (refined!)
I await your next post. May it be filled with the same freedom you always write with!
-Cindy Moon *)

You know, artistic license just made me think of ARt History... and "narrative" made me think of it even more... My goodness, what has that class turned us into hahah.
+ (yeah, gotta insert the page break)
Well, good *gulp* narrative. You've always been apt at imagery, and you didn't fail us. That was quite an interesting way how you weaved poetry and fiction together, I'ven ever seen it done before and u pulled it off pretty nicely. Thumbs up to you.

I'm so amazed at your talent. -mock worship- not worthy, not worthy. ^^ I love the narrative voice in this; almost autobiographical wouldn't you say. Please continue, I am awaiting your next post!
-Cindy Moon *) Purely perfection!