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Reviews For: Of Past Regret and Future Fear

Eriathien
2004-03-09
ch 1,
abuseOh...nice. Conveys your emotions well...
imxnotxyourxstar
2004-03-08
ch 1,
abuseThis was good. The emotion in it was
conveyed well. It had a nice flow and I liked how you broke up the sentences.
"Now my days
Are filled with emptiness
Loneliness
And my nights
Are filled with tears
I wish to cry"
Those were my favorite lines. Keep up the good work
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