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| Eriathien 2004-03-09 ch 1, | abuseOh...nice. Conveys your emotions well... |
| imxnotxyourxstar 2004-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was good. The emotion in it was conveyed well. It had a nice flow and I liked how you broke up the sentences. "Now my days Are filled with emptiness Loneliness And my nights Are filled with tears I wish to cry" Those were my favorite lines. Keep up the good work |