Well I did like it. The only thing was the rhyming sounded a little forced and interupted the flow a bit... still great though.
Stones decay, words last
Nick

I really liked this.

"Dusting the garden gently
Gray with smoke and sin."

Soft, beautiful, and a bit haunting. Lovely.

I love butterfly imagery. This was beautiful.

This is shibby, I love the imagary.
Y'konw what this reminds me of, though?
The bombings and ** during WWII...
Like when we were dropping bombs on Japan and Germany, I can see this being a prespective of someone who had survived/was surviving the drop.
Or just someone who was in it and perished during it, but still.
Its shibby.

Wow... Damn good job, Kitty! Likies muchly. Hope you update again soon!
~WZB~

I love this poem. It's a little hard to decifer the meaning but it sounds like the person's too old to have his/her parents fix everything. Eventually you get to a certain age when things aren't ask fixable. Anyways great poem!

*licks* you act as if its a bloody lobotomy or something
anywho, twas shibby, still maintaining that i like it then of the crap i've written
i doubt ppl will busta misery so don't be too worried, woofles filled up that qouta already ^_^