Wow...love, sex, death, life, loss...all the subjects of poetry throughout the ages you seemed to have captured in this one small story. A litle dark, but still, good writing.

Col! You have got the vampire symbolism down pat! You must write some more on this subject...unless you already have...hmm...
Well, anyway, Vamps are my fav subject to write about, so I pray that I know what I'm talking about when I say this is very good, in my humble opinion!
Away!
Aceles

wow. u know some big words lol. awsome story, I particularly like the way you descirbed everything so well. I can practically see everything happening. read my story. it sux compared to urs, but it's my first so go easy on me. thanks_word*passion

~Very~ nice. You've got the sensuality of vampires right down the line there, the whole thing that makes the vampire mythology so very enduring. Short, but long enough to do it perfectly. I like the gender ambiguity too - why should, after all, be it just women who feel the sensuality of being bitten by a vampire? Very nice.
Only one negative thing I would add actually, and thats just to say you have a typo in the first paragraph, last sentence, after the first comma.