absolutely beautiful

oh wow, this is really cool. I like the descriptions in it. It's too bad I didn't get the meaning in it though.. Too metaphorical to penetrate my stupid mind=) It was very, very cool though. good job

Hey sweetie!
Not bad at all. Nice imagery especially in the first stanza. And I also liked this line "My heady breath fogging up heaven’s glass ceiling." Not bad darlin! I think this is another one of your best that you've written in a while.
Jenna xx

once again, incrediably sensuous and beautiful!