LOL/... its a short storie but its pretty funny.. nice job its going straight in my favorites...

haha aww i was hoping they would go on a trip to victoria secret! i love bringing boys there its oh so fun! Well the ending of this was cute and clever. I'm def using that line in the future lol its true sexy stuff just does cost more! Fun story!

I can see this going some where. You have great comic relief. And very good imagry. I smiled when i read the first paragragh. I know this one is going to be good. Can't wait to read more-Danny Dodger-(yes I'm a girl)

This is a really good story. I'd like to read more of your stories.

Awe, no sexy climax ending?

Uh, oh well. Love the computer nerd concept, seeing as I'm one myself.

--gangster-dolly

Seth making David uncomfortable= fun for the whole family. Or at least for me.
-Aemilia

*howls with mirth* Ah, poor John. *pause* -_- well at least he's getting some, ne? ah, a mistake I found that cracked me up- panty hose, not hoes. though with the type that you're describing, I suppose it could go both ways. *wink* Joking... wonderful story as usual.

Hehehhee Seth in a thong...

Great story. A real comic relief from all of the drama. :)

This is so hilarious! I can just imagine these two in Victoria's Secret. :)

This is so funny! gotta keep it short so I can read the next chapter. :)

I love your writing! It just seems different from most of the crap other people put out(including me)

LOL, this is fantastic. What a jerk, to diss her underwear. YOU DON'T DISS A VAMPIRE'S UNDERWEAR!LOL.
I'd love if you reviewed me stories. In the meantime, I'll continue reading.

Heh, dun know why I didn't read this sooner, I loved this story, gave me an idea of my own...Have I ever told you that I think Seth is hallirous? I love that guy!

I love it.