 Kaylee Sabrina Green 2005-01-19 . chapter 1lol i can see you in cowboy boots lol and i only have one suggestion it should be gal if its a country song love the words silk and lace |
 Sang Yu Nung 2004-08-08 . chapter 1Back from camping and on to reading!! Wow that's sad. I love the line "I was king of the world" cuz it reminds me of that "King of the Hill" game where it can all change so fast. There was a lot of imagery in the bridge, especially the line about "empty bottles, broken glass on the floor". This was very interesting, lol and i like how it ends. *write on* ^.^ |
 Made in U.S.A. 2004-07-20 . chapter 1cute |
 hateselfhate 2004-07-08 . chapter 1I like this song the best so far! Nice rythem! |
 Anna178 2004-04-23 . chapter 1again with the insane greatness...
ANNA |
 Ente 2004-04-21 . chapter 1aw! *sniffle* the chorus was really...just wow!! and i liked the line about the jukebox playing our song, that was probably my favorite part in this one. it's sad, but i still dig it! |
 Steel Winged Angel 2004-04-20 . chapter 1hmm. Not one of your better songs. I like the King of the World idea, but I like your punk(?) songs better. Nice attempt at country though. ;) |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-04-17 . chapter 1heh! this rocks! i like. quite funny with real feelings! |
 KaseyLovesNoOne 2004-04-04 . chapter 1This was a very original piece, which is probably what makes it so good. I enjoyed the style of writing, and I think you have alot of talent. |
 Toondra 2004-04-03 . chapter 1This is sweet, and sad, I really like it. :D |
 pale doll 2004-03-13 . chapter 1Aww, I like some country music! This is good, it's perfect for a country song. You can write about anything and it will always be good! |
 KerriRane 2004-03-10 . chapter 1wow. this is good... i really like this... thanks for the review... i really like this. ITS GOING ON FAVES! |