Hullo wifey! I'sa stalkin' your childhood! ;)

wow no wonder nyte is the way he is!
his parents show him no love.. of course it is hard to show your kid love when they're evil and people end up dead if they're around him enough...

awsome first part. truly awsome. found this book really interesting and i can't wait to finish the others.

Yeah, you were right about these earlier stories being badly written (as far as mechanics go..) but they sure are fun. I read this story kind of skimming over the problems and annoyingly-written passages and really enjoyed it! Your world is fun, your characters are pretty engaging, and the plot is hilarious. I like it a lot, can't wait to read the sequels!

well, i havent read enough of your stuff, so i think ill read the original of some of your current work. normally, im not a huge fan of this is how the world began, beginnings, but this works fairly well. no offense, but this reads like a terry pratchettesqe, but not quite as good beginning. please, i dont mean it as a knock, but i think the rewrite version is more original and better. still, i b bored, and ill be reading ahead.

And last chapter! Well, everyone is off to the wild blue yonder, and the pynule is alive and well again. Hey! Nothing like the monster coming back at the end.

And beware of Pepper! Meow! I've got to write that story!!

Of course, killing Vilma would not explain the whole plot. It seems that once she found out about the Thallium, that she would have made something that would be a bit harder to remove from her personage, such as earrings.

The death of Nyte's folks was quite sad. I did feel bad for Albertus. Rosemarie was not very personable.

I don't follow what the pepper grinder has to do with it all, but aparrently the pynule doesn't like pepper. Ahchoo! (or is that meow? Hey, can I help it that the Galen from the Purple Unicorn universe gets a cat that he names Pepper?)

And Dang, Safia from stopping Nyte from killing that faerie! A good old fashion throttleing would do the soul good!

Well, the documentaries are paying off, and that was a good bit on your part to introduce what the critter is. I think I want a pynule of my own!

Nyte has really screwed up that poor gnome's mind. And you can really tell that something stinks about this Vilma.

You know, if Nyte is alive now, there is no stealing of the dead body involved . . . what is that . . . Corpus Dilecti.

I know, hush!

This was a really good chapter, and I enjoyed it quite a bit. And what a mess Nyte made. I am glad that Safia is curius about what things do. I personally am. I ask too many question, but man, did the stuff really make Nyte bleed everywhere. Wouldn't like to have Safia's laundry bill!

Poor Nyte, I am certain that he felt like hell waking up. Oh, and this is an interesting little thought for you and coming from someone who likes to write about dead things. If Nyte cannot feel in his dead body, how come he can feel the coldness of the herb that Rugo used to knock him out. Hey, I made a similar comment about such things when the boyfriend and I watched a movie called "Demon Warroir Koji". The dead girl seemed to have a hell of a good time for someone who could feel nothing. To feel nothing comes with the good and the bad, mind you. I know, hush!

I don't know about Safia's mother. It seems that Safia would be better off living with her dad. yet, the grass is always greener on the other side, and Safia does miss her brother and dad.

So, I would think that Nyte would be jumping up and down complaining about the ability of any healer related to Safia.

So, what's up with Dim. I know read the second story.

I'm surprised that Nyte put up with the chit chat between brother and sister. he is pretty insensitive about everything anyway. Oh well, it makes for story progression.

I guess Nyte is proned to the TV because of his isolation, and the tube is the only babysitter that he has had that hasn't up and died on him. He doesn't strike me as the type to be really interested in documentaries.

I have actually finished reading this story, but since each chapter I have something to say about, I'll go through the whole routine as usual.

Poor Safia! She definately needs to quit getting that paper, and Nyte is as insentive as a man about the whole thing. Of course, then again, how can you be accused of taking the body, when the body is up walking around. Albeit, he's still dead, but he's up and about.

That was cute how that turned around and was stated that Rugo the Healer was Safia's brother. There isn't much to be said here in this chapter, except I am certain that Nyte is going to really love this when he finds out about he being her brother!