   Caitlyn Lennon 2005-01-25 . chapter 1Yeah I couldnt almost see maroon 5 singing this one..very good I love it completely!! it's just good very good.write onCaitlyn |
 Kaylee Sabrina Green 2005-01-19 . chapter 1yess yess this is excelent as always silk and lace |
 Sang Yu Nung 2004-07-15 . chapter 1*waves* hi!! haven't reviewed you for a while, but I'm baack! Have you been spying on me? Cuz I SO totally relate to it!! Love the simile "lies are like poison, but poison never tasted so sweet"... wow, that was just amazing. It's like the "flowers for algernon" story- ignorance vs. the truth... *sigh*- what a world we live in, huh? Great job- rock on! |
 hateselfhate 2004-07-08 . chapter 1Oh so true! I love this! |
 Anna178 2004-04-23 . chapter 1God...how much better does it get? Your insanely good...*shakes head slowly*...my god...
ANNA |
 Ente 2004-04-21 . chapter 1yeah!! can see why you like it!! the chorus rocks!! it's weird how the whole thing almost contradicts itself saying you want the truth but you're addicted to the lies. but i get it. great job! whatever you do, never stop writing!!
*runs off singing*
"I love living in your make-believe world,
Living off your sweet lies..." |
 Steel Winged Angel 2004-04-20 . chapter 1LIving a lie. Are we all living in a lie? Will we ever know? Dude I LOVE Your songs. *dances around* You're truly one of my favorites. |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-04-17 . chapter 1aw! :( lies suck. song rocks! |
 KaseyLovesNoOne 2004-04-04 . chapter 1"Some say lies are like poison
But poison never tasted so sweet
I've got an addiction
And those lies are what I need"
That's my favorite part! I love how you can take something simple (like the title of a book or movie) and come up with something like this. Awsome work! |
 pale doll 2004-03-13 . chapter 1OOh this is really good, I like this part:
Some say lies are like poison
But poison never tasted so sweet
I've got an addiction
And those lies are what I need
And now I'm begging you to
I love the title too, great work! |
 konochi 2004-03-09 . chapter 1This is a good song. It should get recorded some day. I really like this. |
 Seij 2004-03-09 . chapter 1 Whoa! This is AWESOME!! I loved the chorus! |
 NarcoTemptress 2004-03-09 . chapter 1wow. thats great. *bows to amster of words*
perhaps my band could use it? you dont have to say yes. we're kinda emo, but we can play pretty much anything.
-Mistress of Words |
 Alchemist 3xx3 2004-03-09 . chapter 1I really like this piece. I'm not a fan of Liz Phair or any pop artist but the writing is great and it would make a really good single. |
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