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| Romantically Drunk 2005-04-08 ch 1,  | abuseWell, ten years now, you think he really has left us? :( Still, this is well written and very clever. Only crit I'd give is that you could lose a bit of the rigidity of some of the rhymes, but otherwise it's a nice little ode to someone who's greatly missed. |